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Saturday, May 21, 2016

Firest several pages



FADE IN                                              05/10/16

EXT. RUSTIC TEXAS COUNTRYSIDE – MORNING                      1A
WALK AND DREAM – MYSTERY AND DILEMMA
The sun’s first rays greet the beautiful Texas landscape. Serene. Rustic. Inviting -

- as a solitary WOMAN, whose face we never see, begins scaling the hill of a lonely dirt road, walking determinedly and optimistically, fully engrossed in a book -

                      WOMAN (V.O.)
I write because I have to. I     
cannot not write. It's not as
much what I do as who I am. So
I write, sometimes for pleasure, sometimes to learn, sometimes
to remind myself I'm alive. And
always with an eye to the sublime.   
                       
MID-DAY

As the sun mercilessly beats down on its scorched victims, the woman strolls on, slower than before, continuing up the dusty trail, writing furiously -

   WOMAN (V.O.)
There is so much more I wish
to see, to feel, to dream but
there is no more time to
pretend.  Life is too precious.

EVENING

A haunting, orange sunset illuminates the sky as the woman, spent by her day’s journey, book and papers in hand, thinks of eternity as she crests a hill and slowly trails out of sight -

   WOMAN (V.O)
That is why I write you now,
to tell you who I really am. 
I also write to say good-bye.
             
EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - MORNING
PUSH AND ARGUE – WHO SHE IS/HER GOAL
We now see the face of fiery idealist and hopeless romantic OLIVIA RAMSEY, 35, reading “Walden,” intensely inspired -
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                      OLIVIA (V.O.)
“… to front only the essential
facts of life, and see if I could
not learn what it had to teach,
and not, when I came to die,
discover that I had not lived.”  

-as she reverently shuts the book and her eyes, drinking in every word, bathing in the power and richness of the moment.

                      OLIVIA
          Some day I’ll touch the world    
like that – with a word.                             113

We now see her fully, sweaty and dirty, as she and RUTH, 17, her frustrated, self-conscious daughter, struggle to push their stalled, time-worn Ford Model T down the road. Her hyperactive son, ALEX, 6, barely visible, excitedly steers from the front.

                      RUTH
Fords! Overpriced scrap metal! 
Horses are more reliable. Why are
we always the cheapest, oddest…

        OLIVIA
Just think of us as being unique.

                      RUTH
“Unique”ly weird.

                      OLIVIA
“Weird” is underrated. Besides,
you don't want to miss all this
exercise and attention, do you?
                  
                      RUTH
I’d rather blend in.

             OLIVIA
Come on, everyone wants to stick
out a little and be noticed.

As Alex playfully honks the horn, Ruth retaliates with a scowl, cursing under her breath. Alex honks again and Ruth finally loses it, beating on the car and kicking a tire in a furious frenzy then glances hopelessly at her soiled appearance.

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        RUTH
Look at me! I have a date
tonight. I can’t go like this!

             OLIVIA
So you do want to be noticed!     107

Ruth lets out an exasperated, “get me out of here!” scream.

             OLIVIA
Come on, Ruth, can’t you see
beyond your fear and myopia at
the limitless destiny unveiling            
itself right in front of you?
    
Olivia and Ruth suddenly freeze, sensing something foreboding up the road then quickly run for cover as a pickup truck roars by, honking. Dirt clouds cover the sky - and them. Dusted!

The Model T rolls off the road and Alex yells “HELP!” As the dust settles, the lazy, quaint town of Belleville appears.

EXT. BELLEVILLE TOWN SQUARE – LATER THAT MORNING
TOWN SQUARES – HER ENEMY
Olivia and Alex, shopping bags in hand, playfully window shop past rows of stores. PASSERSBY watch: some amused, most appalled. Lagging behind, Ruth distances herself, embarrassed.
             
             OLIVIA
Which dress should I wear to the
Governor’s Inaugural Gala?

             ALEX
I like the red, furry one with
the blue gloves and white hat…
         (tauntingly)
Wonder what Ruth’s wearing?

Ruth remains aloof, looking around to see who is watching then, unable to hold back any longer, excitedly joins in.

                      RUTH
I'll take the emerald gown,
matching parasol, satin purse…

A frumpy CLERK taps on the window from inside, pointing to a "NO GAWKING" sign while a gaggle of snooty WOMEN GOSSIPS leer on from rocking chairs across the street at Beth’s Beauty Barn.
             OLIVIA
We'd rather dream anyway. In     
our minds we can go anywhere, be anyone, do anything we desire.

             RUTH
Mother! People are watching.

Olivia abruptly halts, casting a stern gaze at the clerk then at the Gossips then at all other onlookers, defying them all –

                      OLIVIA
Let 'em watch.         

- then throws them a cold shoulder as she walks off. Across the street a gang of obnoxious MALE HECKLERS lounge and BS.

             HECKLER 1
          How’s the writing, Shakespeare?
          Anything in there about me?

             HECKLER 2
          We’ll give you something to
write about, honey bunch! Or
maybe we ain’t good enough…

                      OLIVIA
          Aren’t good enough!

Olivia sighs hopelessly as several of Ruth's GIRLFRIENDS rush over to them, embracing Ruth and teasing Alex to his disgust. 
         
             GIRLFRIEND 1
Hi, Mrs. Ramsey! I loved your
guest editorial on free speech.
It was so inspiring and…

                      GIRLFRIEND 2
C’mon, Ruthy, we're getting
sodas. We can take you home.
                  
Olivia welcomes the girls who continue pestering Alex and coaxing Ruth, who looks back pleadingly to Olivia.

                      RUTH
          Please, mother? I’m not a
little girl anymore!                 
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Olivia struggles a moment, knowing she’s not a child but not an adult either, then reluctantly agrees, exhaling a stern sigh -

                      OLIVIA
Get home at a decent hour. 
                            
As the girls leave and Alex waves them off, BUBBA BUKOWSKI, 55, Belleville’s oafish yet kindly mailman excitedly sneaks up from behind, startling them, as he carefully over-inspects a letter.
         
                      LETTERS
Hi, Livi. Looks like another
rejection. Too thin to be…

Olivia quiets him with a growl and cold stare, grabs her mail, and eyes the letter with suspicion then signs, knowing he’s probably right. Shrugging it off, she heads down the street.

Having to coax Alex along, they reach the Hope Christian Church charity drop-off site and a pile of donated items - all junk. This is the main reason they came to town in the first place. A sign reads, “GOD LOVES A CHEERFUL GIVER.” Alex frowns.
                       
As Olivia gives him an “It’s time” glance, Alex opens the bag he’s now clutching and looks forlornly inside at his favorite caste-iron toys then glances pathetically back at Olivia.

              ALEX
Can I have a minute to myself?

Olivia empathetically nods, proud of Alex, who takes out his prized tractor, caresses it then returns it to his bag. He walks slowly to the pile and solemnly relinquishes his stash.

Pastor G. MATTHEW GATES, 52, overly friendly and staunchly Baptist, greets them, offering Alex an encouraging smile. 

                      GATES 
With that kind of faith, son,
You may be a pastor some day!

             ALEX
I'd rather be a gangster.
             
The crowd gasps as Alex playfully shoots an imaginary Tommy gun into the air then becomes soberly conscious of the crowd and remembers his pitiful plight. Pastor Gates commiserates with his predicament a moment then leans in to him with a sly smile.
                      GATES 
You know, we might not need
quite all that metal today. 

A smile radiates over Alex's face as he reclaims one of his bags and runs back to Olivia, freezing as he meets her stare.

He regrettably returns to the pile, painstakingly forfeits his sack, and sadly faces Pastor Gates. 

ALEX
Sacrificing your favorite stuff
is part of being… a “gentleman.”

Hating that word, Alex slinks back to Olivia who gives him a big hug then resolutely pulls out some notes from her purse.

Clearing her throat loudly, she waves over to Pastor Gates, and marches toward him. Seeing her coming, he reluctantly smiles.

                      GATES 
          More sermon criticism, Olivia? 
I’m still absorbing last week’s.
Maybe you should preach Sunday.

                      OLIVIA
Maybe I should.
                                          
The crowd gasps again at her boldness as she pockets her pages, grabs Alex, and hurries off, just in time to meet Belleville’s most feared and hated resident, newspaper owner and self appointed town boss, JOSIAH SMYTHE, 66.They exchange frowns.

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